The Importance of (Sometimes) Playing Second Fiddle
There’s a story in the Old Testament of Moses standing on a
hilltop as the Israelite army went into battle against the Amalekites. While
watching from a distance might have been an eminently sensible thing to do,
Moses didn’t see this as an opportunity to settle down with a flask of tea and
the latest edition of the Jericho Times. Instead, as the Israelites
entered the fray, Moses raised his arms towards heaven.
This was great news for the Israelites. I’d like to say they
were winning hands-down … but in fact, the opposite was true. As long as Moses
kept his arms in the air, they were stronger than the enemy. However, as the
day progressed, Moses – unsurprisingly – became tired. As his arms started to
droop, the Amalekites rallied.
Fortunately, on this occasion Moses wasn’t alone at the top
of the mountain. Aaron and Hur stood either side of him and kept his hands
raised until the Israelites prevailed over their enemy.
So, who are the important secondary characters in your own
work? What difference do they make to the life of your chief protagonist? Are
they there simply to make the hero stand out, or are they well fleshed-out
enough to be believable in their own right? If you’re writing non-fiction, what
secondary themes do you need to support your main points? How do they add depth
and breadth to what you’re writing?
Of course, the story of Moses, Aaron and Hur also reminds us
of the importance of having those around us who can encourage us when we’re
struggling. As Christians we’re called to bear one another’s burdens, and that
includes the writerly kind. Do we have those we can reach out to for support,
and do we look for opportunities to offer that same support to others?
Over to you – what role do your secondary characters play?
Is there another writer to whom you can offer encouragement? Let me know your
thoughts in the comments.
Fiona Lloyd is Chair of the Association of
Christian Writers and writes regularly for Together magazine. Her first novel,
The Diary of a (trying
to be holy) Mum, was published by Instant Apostle in January
2018. Fiona also works for Christians Against Poverty.
Twitter: @FionaJLloyd &
@FionaLloyd16
Beautiful post Fiona! I believe there is also the danger of making the second fiddle override the main character. In one of my WIPs, I realised that I was giving the villian so much admirable attention and had to work my way to getting the hero back up! I agree with you about giving glory to second fiddles who help the hero shine. I see a lot of second fiddles in football who were instumental to helping the scorer score a goal but everyone jumps on the scorer and the ' second fiddle' is ignored! In writing, we can correct or enhance those roles tha are not glamorous but have a powerful effect on the overall finishing. Tx for the reminder. Blessings!
ReplyDeleteMaybe your villain needs his own book!
DeleteThis has really made me think about my secondary characters and their roles. A great post. On that topic, I was mightily offended when my daughter told me that she liked Camilla, a secondary character in my memoir 'Miss, What Does Incomprehensible Mean?' better than the main character, apparently having forgotten that the main character was her mother. It's taking a while to forgive. But I obviously drew Camilla very convincingly!
ReplyDeleteOoh, bet she's been crossed off your Christmas card list!
DeleteI wonder how tired Aaron and Hur's arms got too? Were they one either side of Moses holding one arm each or did they take turns perhaps? Much to think about in terms of teamwork and support thank you.
ReplyDeleteI think the text says that they were one either side - but you're right, it must have been tiring for them, too. Thanks, Liz.
DeleteI live the story of Aaron and Hur.i can think of many people who have been them for me. Not that I'm a hero, but we all need people to stand with us. It's made me think about me secondary characters too. In fact several of mine are now screaming for books of their own.
ReplyDeleteIt's great when we find those people we can rely on to support us - and when we can do the same for others!
DeleteSecondary characters are so useful for moving the plot on convincingly, but do you find they are sometimes intent on elbowing their way in for a spot in the limelight?
ReplyDeleteFrequently! The tricky question is how much time in the spotlight to allow them without letting them take over...
DeleteI loved this! I've got lots of secondary characters and I tend to shine the spotlight on them as each book develops. Without them, where would Isabella be? Certainly not where she currently is. A thought-provoking read. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHaving a series is a great way to give secondary characters their turn in the limelight. Thanks for reading and commenting.
DeleteIn real life there are no secondary characters. Aaron and Hur were the central characters in their own lives. Everybody we meet, however fleetingly, is living their own stories, and we are just their minor characters!
ReplyDeleteOf course, as writers we can't tell everyones story, but it's worth keeping in mind that even the most minor characters are just passing through on their way to something else. I'm reminded of a certain fox in one of Tolkien's books (I forget which) who happened to pass by the Dwarves whilst he was out 'on business of his own'.
Keeping that thought in the back of our minds might help us keep those secondary characters from being mere place fillers. And who knows, it might bring up some interesting plot twists or opportunities for character development. As in real life, you can never be sure what might happen when two lives intersect, however breifly.
Thanks for an interesting topic, Fiona.
Really interesting. The secondary characters in life and in books deserve their moment. This post made me think. Thanks, Fiona!
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