GETTING TO GRIPS WITH PREMISE by Bobbie Ann Cole

It is easy to confuse our opening situation with our premise. A premise is the compass that guides us from start to resolution An opening situation is a teaser we might dangle: person / problem / now what? A premise, on the other hand, tells our whole story in 1-2 sentences: person with problem / tries to fix / outcome. Our premise is also different from our story message—the important truth we want our reader to take away from our story. The most elegant premise that I was taught is that of The Godfather : A younger son is reluctant to join the family business, but is persuaded to do so. In the movie, Michael wants to be a lawyer with a WASP wife, but his Sicilian honour-shame values and family loyalty force him to take over as his father’s successor. Not knowing our opening situation, message and premise before beginning writing is like jumping in the car and driving away, without knowing why, or where we are going. These elements are often really hard to work o...