Thin Blue Line

Greetings! This is my first MTW blog so I’d really appreciate your comments!

I do like a good Ordnance Survey map. 

They are not books, but perhaps they fire similar brain neurons? There you are on a beach relaxing in the summer Sun or sat in a garden, buried in a book as the sun tracks across the sky. It’s paper and ink, black on white, but the written words have become a mere representation of the characters, shuffling around in your brain’s imaginary world. I confess I did skip a few too many Chemistry lectures at University; I had relocated to Middle-Earth, thanks to J.R.R.Tolkein’s The Lord of the Rings.


Maps, if you linger over them long enough, have the same effect: representations of a reality your mind constructs as you immerse yourself in the contours, unknown symbols, disused railway tracks…and a thin blue line. You imagine the hills, the light, the terrain, the rockfaces, the shake holes, and disused railway lines. I’ll come to the thin blue line later.

Here’s my question: how much is writing the reverse process? If the words of a book and contours on a map construct an imaginary world in our minds, is that how you write a book but in reverse? From an imagined world to words on a page? Is this spontaneous or planned? Do you almost write the story as it unfolds like a film in your imagination? Or do you start with a few seed ideas or characters, then map it all out, plotting your intended route…before writing?

I’m asking partly out of curiosity. I write some poetry and am trying to write a children’s book and a historical fiction set in the 1790s, and I wonder what others do?

I’m also asking from a theological perspective.

Back to the thin blue line.

When I moved to Bristol one of my first purchases was OS Map OL 13 Brecon Beacons and I pored over it for hours. And then a short, thin blue line, emerging from halfway up a rockface, looked at me and I looked at it. Tent in a rucksack, boots on, and an equally map-absorbed friend and I set off to investigate. True to the map, a very small stream of pure cold water flowed from a crack in the rockface. It reminded me of Moses in the desert.

‘He turned the rock into a pool of water, turned flint into a fresh spring water’ Ps 114v8. Is this how writing works? Our minds and imaginations, rather than sources of fresh spring water, seize up and feel like flint, but then something shifts, and ideas and words flow once more. 


But I am curious to find out whether other writers have the same ‘spiritual’ experience of ‘flint to fresh spring water’ but also what you do once the words and ideas begin to flow, maybe as a thin blue line rather than the Zambezi!

End of blog 1. I hope that the verse from Ps114 will encourage you as it does me and may God bless all of us with pen in hand or fingers hovering over a keyboard.







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  1. What a lovely post. I love the analogies you use of the map reading process and the flint to fresh spring water as similar to writing.

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  2. A fascinating debut, John!
    My dad passed on an interest in Ordnance Survey Maps to me. Any work of fiction that includes a map has my attention immediately. When it comes to writing, I think I go on more of a magical mystery tour - setting off without a clear idea of the destination, but perhaps some background knowledge.

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  3. Insightful analogy! Writing a novel is certainly like going on a journey, and to have a map helps! And the spring reference brings us back to the question of, What is creativity? Where do ideas come from, and form?

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    1. That would take numerous cups of coffee and too many cheesecake slices to unpick...or real ales, glasses of wine...but definitely worth the effort.

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  4. What a brilliant post, John. Thanks. I have had some experience of 'flint to fresh spring water'. A while ago, I met up with a Christian friend who I only see occasionally and told him I had taken up writing as an interest and in the discussion, I mentioned this didn't include poetry. The next day, from nowhere and with no intent, poems just came to me and I wrote a one every day for about a month or more. I'd forgotten about that. As you say, it felt like 'something had shifted.'

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    1. Isn't that just the way it is. All the way from left-field.

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  5. Great first post! Thought provoking and sends my imagination into exiting new realms. It would be nice to know a bit more about you in a little bio at the end… maybe next time?

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    1. Didn’t mean to be anon there. Hello, I’m Joanne from the 20th of the month. :D

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    2. Have to admit that left me chuckling...I've been called many things but '7th of the Month' feels about right! Bio comment duly noted.

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    3. Welcome 7th of the month from Previous 7th of the month. That thin blue line is sometimes the merest trickle of inspiration (maybes and might bes and what ifs) but sometimes (thank you Jesus!) it becomes a torrent. I love your use of maps as an analogy

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  6. Fantastic debut John. I too am a map geek, but it wasn't until I did my mountain leadership training (many moons ago) that I started to instantly visualise a hillside. The contours never change on a map, whereas man-made features do. As in our storytelling, some things are fixed and others have flexibility. I fixed example might be that a certain character would never behave in a certain way, though as writers, isn't it great to make them act out of character. When I write a novel, I tend to have a limited map with the first few legs of the journey. I never know the destination, but the journey is the exciting part - I guess I'm a Plantster.

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    1. Thanks Brendan. Making characters acting out of character...like that! And an 'MLA man' - respect! I did the training - and still have the green log book - but my knee decided to grumble.

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  7. Fantastic first post, John! Great insights into the writing process. I love the image of the thin blue line, water from the rock, and I agree that something shifts and then creativity is released. It's helpful to START writing, however uninspired you feel, and then something shifts ... the rock cracks and the water starts to flow.

    I love maps. And I would be happy to travel to Middle-earth any time! Norway is Middle-earth incarnate, but many places in Britain also resemble it ...

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    1. Yes. I agree, it's often as we start writing that the flint seems to crack. Like that! Thank you.

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    2. Well, John, thank you. There is some wonderful food for thought here, especially the 'thin blue line' and the 'flint into a fresh spring water' phrase. Curiously, I had been contemplating spring water and Psalm 23 and in the context of a local sandy stream, the sand being so very different to the flint facings on some of our Suffolk walls. There is a part of me that found Physical Geography too much like Maths at school (I never could master figures beyond rhythm beats); but we were once set an English exercise to create an artistic map (using our knowledge from Geography, I suspect) of an island described in sketchy sentences in a particular novel. At that point I became fascinated and absorbed in the challenge of trying to map word on to symbol. And I believe that while as Christians we follow the same Leader, Christ responds to our particular and individual needs as we go through the pastures and valleys with Him.

      P.S. Come to think of it, I note we speak of 'writers' BLOCK' on the one hand and the 'FLOW' of our words on the other!

      Caroline Gill (not sure if my name will appear).

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  8. Psalm 114:18 is a brilliant verse for writing! I've never thought of it that way before. Perhaps a verse to print out and stick up in my study. Thank you.

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  9. Great first blog! My books play out like films in my head, often too quick for me to get them down! I see the scenes so vividly, and wonder sometimes if I really do them justice with my words. I can only hope the result is something life giving and refreshing. On another subject , my husband loves OS maps. I mean LOVES them. Give him a map and he'll be quiet for hours...ha!

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    1. 🤣 re: maps & your husband & your visual starting point is so interesting. I have a video but it’s more or less running at writing speed!

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  10. Hello John, I only remember to check 'More than Writers' once in a while but your post was a blessing to me today. Thank you. Personal encouragement (not actually related to writerly activity!) but also I am inspired to try drawing maps as a starting point for writing. Or perhaps just looking at exisiting maps. I have never been a map nerd but my husband is!! Thank you!

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    2. How interesting. The children's story I'm attempting to write will have a map but the map sort of evolved as the story unfolded. But you've made me think!

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  11. Lovely post, John! Thanks too for sharing Psalm 114:8. Not a fan of maps, which made me drop Geography. They are as complicated as a web. But I have enjoyed your enthusiasm here.

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  12. Hi John, from me, the 9th of the month. You had me at LOTR, which I've recently started reading, I'm up to chapter 7 - In the house of Tom Bombadil - and maps, as my wife used to be a cartographer - creating language maps. I look forward to hearing more about your children's book, and welcome to the MTW family :)

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    1. Tom Bombadil - such a great name! One of the difficulties I’m finding with fiction is settling in place names and character names…tipped hat to Tolkien again. He knew a thing or two. Enjoy the rest of LOTR! And thanks from the 7th for commenting to the 9th!

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