What is it You’re Writing? by Rebecca Seaton
What
is it You’re Writing? by Rebecca Seaton
Trying to put it succinctly.
This sometimes
feels like the dreaded question. We feel like we’re supposed to have an answer.
Not any answer either, but a clear, coherent answer on the nature and progress
of our current project: this is often easier said than done!
This can
come in different forms depending on the audience’s needs and expectations. The
‘elevator pitch’ is a common format: if you were stuck in a lift with someone,
could you quickly and simply explain your basic premise? It should be about
twenty words. A synopsis is more of a summary and this is probably intended
more for a deliberate pitch, for example, when submitting work to an agent. For
this, we want a bit more detail, it expands on the basic premise, allowing for
themes, main events and principal characters to be highlighted.
However,
not everything is easily defined. How confident are we with describing the
genre of our work or its target audience, especially when not everyone holds
the same view of content? What one person considers young adult may be children’s
literature to somewhere else; there isn’t always a clear boundary, just as
there isn’t always with genres. And what about crossover? Is it a supernatural thriller
or a fantasy work with a detective aspect? I’m a great fan of writers like James
Oswald who blur the lines of genre but it’s not as easy to sell an unusual concept
when you’re new to the game.
What it
comes down to is what do we want the reader to know? If we know what we want
our ideal reader to know about our story when they come to our book launch or
see our book in the shops (we hope) then we will have the same words on the tip
of our tongue when speaking to an agent or publisher.
Plans and
ideas evolve so it’s important to review what we’re thinking about our own work
as we make progress with it. I’ve recently come to realise that my WIP might be
just fantasy rather than YA fantasy and that isn’t a problem, so long as I’m
clear about that and why it is. Crucially, know what is the core of the work
and what is window dressing when you’re talking about it. The person you’re
pitching to needs to know it’s a fantasy trilogy centred on a teenage protagonist
with a redemptive story arc; they don’t need to know what colour eyes the
different goblins tribes have. If they read that far, they’re already hooked.
Be
prepared, your opportunity may come when you least expect it. I went to a ‘meet
the agent’ event fully prepared to speak about my already published work but
found agents more interested in what I was currently working on. Naively, I hadn’t
really thought as much about that but was lucky that some of what I said
resonated with a couple of agents.
Practise
on a friend if you can and you’ll be ready for interesting conversations in the
future, as well as writing more effectively as you remind yourself of the
direction you’re going in.
#amwriting #amwritingfantasy #ACW
Wow! What a really lovely post! Thanks Rebecca. I was truly blessed by your 4th and 6th paragraphs, especially. I will soon be interviewed by Maressa Mortimer in her blog about my latest book - 'The New Creatures'. This post has clearly defined and patterned my thoughts. I used to struggle about what to say in response to the question you asked. I have never been satisfied with my different responses. But saying what I want my readers to know, nails the question on the head!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS POST. Blessings.
ReplyDeleteGreat blog Rebecca, I love a good elevator pitch. My problem is that I'm usually working on 2 or 3 WIPs at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rebecca. I am very bad at answering the ‘what are you writing’ question. I’m even bad at describing books I’ve already written! Some great tips in your blog. ~Emily
ReplyDeleteVery useful tips, Rebecca. It reminds me to formulate a good elevator pitch well in advance of needing it!! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteBeing armed with a concise overview of your work is crucial. One of the benefits of doing events is that you are forced to come up with one when a random stranger wanders over and asks, "So what's your book about?" A great blog, Rebecca
ReplyDeleteThanks Rebecca, I found this helpful. I have been told my WIP is unclear in its genre because it's a detective / crime novel but doesn't focus enough on police procedure, which the genre conventionally demands, I'm told. For me, the story is as much about what drives the characters themselves outside of their occupations. I'm going to pinch 'redemptive story arc' from you as that fits well, and I hadn't thought of the phrase before. Thanks!
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