The beauty of Midrash!
Eve was
awake. She was just 2 weeks old in the heavenly realms but it never ceased to
amaze her how each day held something new, exciting, exhilarating and even
intriguing! The previous day, she had met Mr Serpent again. She had consciously
fought dwelling on his appealing and magnetic personality even as she flashed back
on the incidence. Was he stalking her? Adam
didn’t think so.
‘Hello,
beautiful’. She had ignored him but he continued speaking.
‘ I
particularly like the way your breasts have been created. They are sexually
attractive compared to Mrs Apes’,’ he blurted.
‘What are
you talking about?’
‘I can see
what you can’t see because I have eaten
that apple!
‘If you are
here to try and tempt me again, go away! You are not a friend of Abba. I won’t
touch it!’ Clicking her tongue, she had walked off in search of Adam.
‘But before
you go away, have you never wondered why I’m still alive? Yet, I have tasted
it…’
‘Adam?’ she
called quietly. ‘Are you awake?’ To her surprise he whispered back…
END OF
EXTRACT
I got thinking. When the saints of God
gathered, the devil gathered with them. We hear him talking to God about Job! Guess what? He whispers that my writing is
rubbish! Dear writers, my advice is: let us continue to ‘resist the devil and he
will flee from us’. [James 4:7b]
From the
extract above, I used Midrash. I love using it in my biblical fantasy writing. In the extract above, am I ‘showing or
telling’? What is the difference? I will appreciate your feed backs below!
Thanks. Blessings.
Sophia Anyanwu lives in SE London with her loving
husband. She’s an educationist,
encourager, reviewer, author and poet. She’s an active grandmother to 7
grandchildren when not writing! She is
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This is a great snapshot of the temptation.
ReplyDeleteYrs indeed Brandon, thank you. Blessings.
Delete*Yes not 'Yrs'
ReplyDeleteWell done Sophia! There's so much creativity in your dialogue. Aside, "clicking her tongue," you have done more telling.
ReplyDeleteThanks Peculiar for your feedback. Really appreciate. Blessings.
DeleteIntriguing! I'm not great with show not tell as I enjoy both!
ReplyDeleteMe too! Thanks so much Maressa!Blessings.
DeleteSo well described Sophia. Also, I read that verse every day, James 4 :7-8 Resist the Devil, and he will flee from you, Draw nigh to God, and He will draw nigh to you. Amen. God bless you.
DeleteAmen! God bless you too Derrice. Thanks so much. Blessings.
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