Points of View by Rebecca Seaton
Points of View by Rebecca
Seaton
There is much debate about the
best way to narrate a story. The Point of View, or POV, is critical to this. Deciding
on a point, or points, of view will determine the type of experience your
reader has.
Up close and personal.
Some authors opt for first
person as the point of view, putting the protagonist in the driving seat. For
added effect, some writers also use present tense. For something like a
thriller, this can heighten the tension dramatically as the reader is carried
by the extreme emotions of the main character. However, disadvantages are that
this can limit the overall view of what is happening. Again, a writer may
happily swap that in for the immediacy and ability for the reader to empathise
with their hero or heroine but there is a trade-off.
Omniscient overview
Let’s admit it, we writers
like to play god! The third-person omniscient viewpoint enables the writer to
show the reader their world. I use this writing fantasy as there is a lot of
information I need to convey and events happen across the different continents
of my world. In order to show the bigger picture, I’ve had to find other ways
to show the emotions and drama my main characters are part of.
Third person so you can see the whole world
Are you mad? You are mad.
Then there’s second person. When
I first heard of this I thought it was a crazy idea and I feel quite
uncomfortable reading in second person. But maybe that’s the point. Successful
novels using second person include Nuala Ni Chonchuir’s You, where present
tense second person enables empathy with the protagonist, as well as sections
of N K Jemisin’s the Fifth season, where second person is used for one
viewpoint to trick the reader. Second person, like first, can be a great way to
use an unreliable narrator as a plot device.
Considering viewpoint keeps us
humble. What may seem really important to us might mean nothing to another…and
only God really has the full picture and we can rest in this knowledge. ‘…for
whenever our heart condemns us, God is greater than our heart and knows
everything.’ (1 John 3:20)
Rebecca writes fantasy novels, wrangles cats,
chicks and children in various capacities and is becoming increasingly obsessed
with steampunk.
Really lovely post, Rebecca thanks. For a long time, and maybe still, I was confused about presenting POV. Some of my critics say that there shouldn't be more than one POV in a chapter for example. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteI have never used the 2nd pov and it does sound intriguing. Thanks for the scripture. Yes, God has the full picture of what we write through His inspiration. Blessings.
Thanks for your comment. Generally, multiple POVs are tricky although they can be useful for showing different motives etc : George R R Martin uses this to great effect in Game of Thrones where different chapters are narrated by different characters. However, I think different voices within one chapter would be challenging to read...and write!
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Thanks for your feedback, Rebecca! Blessings.
DeleteThanks Rebecca. I've been reading a number of multi POV novels recently - the One Of Us Is Lying trilogy is particularly effective. My own WIP has a 2 person POV, which I'm really enjoying writing, although it comes with challenges. It's fun writing in two different voices and styles. And the reader gets to learn things ahead of the protagonists as a result.
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