Decorating the tree
Decorating the
Christmas tree is a bit like writing fiction. Come off it!? No? Perhaps? Well,
maybe, with a bit of imagination.…
Decision One: Choose a setting
TREE: Living room, corner of? Pride of place in the hall? On the patio? Or wherever.
Story: Snowdonia? Chicago? Lands End? The middle of the Atlantic? A place a bit like Narnia, though of our own making, of course. And so on.
Decision Two: Assemble and inspect the characters
TREE: Boxes are brought down from the loft, the contents examined with delight
as memories are stirred. Ah, yes, Auntie/cousin/friend gave us that one;
son/daughter/Mum chose that for us during a visit to South Africa/the Czech
Republic/the pier at Southend. Etcetera.
Story: Examples: Commonly known as Ant, quirky, enjoys teasing people. Nancy, prim and proper, zero sense of humour. Digby, sings enthusiastically but has a limited range of notes. Operatic tenor, seriously talented, comes to stay. And so on.
Decision Three: The theme/genre
TREE: Tastefully following a colour scheme, with matching tinsel and lights
which blend tastefully with the décor? Makes a quiet statement, relaxes guests?
A tree upon which several small children have worked industriously and for once
they didn’t argue? Or ditto except that they did argue? Etcetera.
Story: Winds its way through a romantic landscape to a satisfying
conclusion? A cliff hanger that dangles the reader over the edge until he/she
plops back into the reality of the fireside chair? An unnecessarily frightening
experience but one which will not let the reader go until the last full stop.
And so on.
Decision Four: Editing your work
TREE: Have we/the children been over-enthusiastic with the decorations? Is
there a little too much of that lovely blue tinsel? Or do we love the look? Is the whole tree crammed
with every beautiful object available? Is there really a tree underneath all the
fripperies and items that were absolutely essential as we/the children worked.
Do we need to do a mild/medium/severe pruning? Or is the tree beautiful as it is?
Story: Have we been mildly/a little/powerfully over-enthusiastic with
the adjectives/adverbs/description? Do we need to do a mild/medium/severe
pruning? Have we included enough information/clues to the solution of the
mystery/description? Is the whole story effective/compelling? Is it completely
satisfactory as it stands?
Wonderful analogy; thank you, Veronica.
ReplyDeleteLovely post, Veronica! How imaginative and creative this is. I totally agree with you that decorating the xmas tree is like writing fiction with God's inspiration. Last year I had lots of red on ours[romantic genre?] but this year, it's gold[historical genre]? So Veronica, what aspect of the decorating will land it a best seller? Blessings.
ReplyDeleteGood question. A fine balance of colours/characters, something that makes us stop/marvel/think , and a delightful smattering of the unexpected, perhaps.
DeleteBrilliant! Such clever analogies here. Thank you!
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