Context is Everything, by Deborah Jenkins
I'm Zooming in the lounge now
Before: (with the preposition in replaced with into) I'm going to move at speed into the lounge
Now: (with a warning look) I'm going to chat with friends/my boss/my department, on-line, so you'd better pipe down or I'll kill you
I'm shattered!
Before: I've taught all day, cooked a meal, cleared away, hung up and folded washing, made two phone calls and been to a church meeting
Now: I've done two Zoom calls and a Whites Wash
I'm off for my daily exercise
Before: Would never say it. (Or do it.)
Now: I'm going for a walk for half an hour.
I'm going to post a letter
Before: I'll stop at the postbox en route to town in the car
Now: I'm so excited about leaving the house on a legitimate walk, I could almost burst.
Are you watching the daily briefing?
Before: Wouldn't have said it, except possibly in relation to the school day, replacing watching with going to and getting rid of daily
Now: Are you watching the latest episode in the horror movie that is our actual lives, or are you choosing sanity over hard facts?
Are we running out of hand gel?
Before: (at school, with mild interest) Has anyone seen that bottle we use after cleaning the hamster cage?
Now: (with rising panic) We've only got a litre left! I'm shielding so you need to get out there NOW and buy a serious amount of back-up.
Have you got your mask with you?
Before: It's embarrassing to use public transport in fancy dress so don't forget that bag with your mask in.
Now: If you've forgotten it, you're basically stuffed, condemned to wander the empty streets of your own town while I go into shops where it's warm and there are actual human beings to stare at from a distance
It's Weekly Family Quiz Night
Before: Wouldn't say it, or do it. One daughter lives in London. My son and daughter in law live in Sheffield. We live in Sussex.
Now: It's time to exchange Lockdown news and have some fun on Zoom together with help from Jay's Virtual Pub Quiz. Highlight of the week.
I had went for a walk with a friend
Before: I walked next to her, chatting and laughing, enjoying the wide sky and quiet trees.
Now: I walked 2m away from her, stumbling on stones/tufts/tree roots trying to lipread as I couldn't hear a word she said. I forgot we even have sky and trees.
It was the best party ever! (said by my daughter)
Before: I had a meal out, partied with all my friends and rolled home at 2am feeling a little light-headed
Now: I had a meal in, partied with paper friends (produced by Mum) and wandered upstairs with a glass of Baileys to play games with real people online
It's all about the context. It got me thinking about how words need to change in context for writers. I recently attempted to write a children's story (picture book). I had to think carefully about the words I used. They had to be simple but not pedestrian, powerful but not flowery. I wanted most of my words and phrases to be instantly understood but I also needed to model slightly more advanced ones, in context, to model good writing slightly above my readers' ability. In this way, I hoped to promote learning as well as give pleasure.
There are so many ways in which we may write with attention to context: -
- tailoring a story with an eye to including contemporary issues
- changing vocabulary to appeal to different tastes/interests
- making settings and situations relevant to the current world situation
- writing in a best selling genre with a view to sales potential
- writing to encourage/support/build up, as in for a church newsletter or local group
- creating humour by using language in the 'wrong' context as Fran Hill said in Martin Horton's brilliant post about funny writing
Deborah Jenkins is a primary school teacher and freelance writer who has written articles, text books, devotional notes and short stories. She writes regularly for the tes. She has also completed a novella, The Evenness of Things, available as an Amazon e-book. She is currently seeking a publisher for her recently finished novel, Braver. Deborah loves hats, trees and small children. After years overseas with her family, who are now grown up, she lives in Sussex with her husband, a Baptist minister, and a cat called Oliver
As always, funny, pertinent, wise and apposite. I LOVE the Zooming into the lounge. How often, pre lock down did we use that word? Hardly ever, in this household. I loved it x
ReplyDeleteHa! Thank you Ruth. Yes, it's intriguing isn't it? It really makes me think about the language I'm using and whether the person I'm speaking/writing to, will understand my hidden meanings. Thanks for your comment! x
DeleteTwo Zoom calls and a Whites Wash! I so identify with this post. And I love the hoovering story. I'm fascinated, too, by how words weasel their way into the language in new ways and take on a grammar of their own. Are you on Zoom? Can I Zoom you? I was just Zooming. Are you Zoomable? I'm Zoom-weary. I suppose the same happened with Google.
ReplyDeleteI can remember when there were loads of search engines, none of them Google. The one that sticks in my mind is Hotbot. Imagine that. "Hang on a sec, I'll just Hotbot it". "I spent most of Friday Hotbotting."
ReplyDeleteHaha! Brilliant! How about 'Off to Bing it' ? Or 'Let's Bing again, like we did last summer...'?
DeleteBinging in the Rain. Bing a Bong of Sixpence. Bing! by Ed Sheeran.
DeleteYes! I love the ways words change and move on and I'm fascinated how I react to them. Some, I love, like the ones you mention above. Others, I dislike for odd reasons. For instance I've never really liked 'Many thanks' at the end of emails. which came in a few years ago, because an ex-boss, who didn't like me, used to use it all the time. So I try not to use it. Ridiculous really, but interesting!
ReplyDeleteExcellent post, Deborah. The catch phrase 'You are no mute.' seems to have acquired a context all it's own!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Tish! Hope you are well? Yes, I forgot that one. There can't be many Zoom meetings where that doesn't happen at least once!
DeleteOr even, 'I'm going to mute you all now!' (to my exercise class from our teacher, but also used by many in assorted contexts. And of course, to be 'unmasked' has radically changed its meaning... What fun we can have with language :-)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely! It is an endless source of fascination to people like us, isn't it? Thanks, Clare.
DeleteThis was wonderful, Deborah, especially this bit that made me chuckle out loud 'It's embarrassing to use public transport in fancy dress so don't forget that bag with your mask in.'
ReplyDeleteI'm loving how the Lord has set this all up, this trail of humour, reminding us that we need to laugh. :)
So important, isn't it? How else would we get through. Glad you enjoyed it, Martin :)
Delete'You're on mute' and 'She's frozen' and 'It threw me out.' These are 3 phrases I probably wouldn't have used before March last year.
ReplyDeletethank you for the smile across my rapt face and several outbursts of laughter.
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