Two Lines Can Tell A Story. By Dan Cooke
Two lines can tell a story.
and they can tell them, in I think, two different ways.
The first of which would be in micro stories, the two
sentences tell the entire story between them, the first being both the opening
and the middle, and the second being the middle and the end. All condensed down
into a short but, hopefully, interesting piece of work.
"Upon Simon's return from work, he discovered that burglars
had had their way and ransacked the place. So preoccupied was he though with
his missing items, that he didn't notice they had taken the entire front
door."
Nothing however says that both lines have to follow the same
theme. While both lines above are two halves to the same story, the first is
enticing and serious, while the second is slightly more comical. Nothing is
better in something sort like this than leaving a few dangling threads. of
course questions need answering in the long game, but leaving a few questions
unanswered allows the reader to fill in gaps themselves, and also leaves open
the possibility of a follow-up.
The second way that two lines can be used to tell a story is
as a part of a much bigger story, and this is a little harder to pull off, but
can reap great rewards when done well.
Essentially, either the first two, or two of the earliest
lines, will set the tone, and almost in their own way tell the story, giving
the reader the opportunity to establish what they are going to read, and what
they might expect from the story ahead.
"Two Lines Can Tell A Story" by Debora Halton. Notice how the two halves are vastly different in tone and setting, yet when combined tell the whole story. |
So for example, one of the first lines may set up a certain
rule, building, character, explaining who they are, what the rule is, why it
exists. Essentially, that first line can be used to establish.
It is then that the second line kicks in, which takes what
was already established and can do multiple things with it. Expand on it
further, turn it on its head, both. That second line, following on from what
has already been established, can tell the readers all they need to know, it
can set the tone of the story to come, reveal potential twists (subtly if done
well) and most importantly, tell the reader the general direction the story is
going to go in.
The relationship between the two lines is not one that has
much depth put into it, but their importance to the reader, story, tone and
even yourself as the writer can make a fundamental impact on tone, plot,
characters.
Two lines can tell a story, not just in terms of the words
they carry, but the weight of the rest of the story above their shoulders.
I want to know the rest of Simon's story! The state he must have been in not to notice his front door is missing... really want to know the rest of it now.
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