Passing our knowledge on well by Claire Musters
In the last issue of Together
magazine, Andy Peck was looking at the book Made
to Stick; why some ideas stick and others die by Chip and Dan Heath. It was his explanation of their idea
that knowledge can be a curse that really struck me. Andy said that they showed
how research in economics and psychology points to the fact that when we know
something it becomes hard for us to imagine not knowing it. This results in us
becoming bad communicators; especially to those engaging with the facts for the
first time.
I was immediately reminded of my first job as an editor in
the General Reference department of a big publishing company. Most of my work
centred around finding experts in their field (on subjects ranging from
interiors to mountaineering to fly fishing!) and then helping them to craft a
beginner’s guide to the subject. I found a lot of the manuscripts were like
gobbledygook to me; it made me feel a little foolish, but working on a subject
I wasn’t an expert in enabled me to go back to the authors and gently explain
where I felt they hadn’t provided enough information. Often, they had simply
assumed a certain level of knowledge because they knew it so well themselves
and I had to work hard to make sure their text was clear and accessible for
readers.
As I reflected on this, I started to think: as writers how
do we ensure we are conveying our knowledge well to our readers? As a
non-fiction writer, I hope the experience I have had as an editor helps me to think
carefully as to whether I am fully explaining the points I am putting across. However,
I know the reality is that we all have our blind spots – and even us editors
miss things anyway! ;) Often, when I’m writing a chapter I just let it all come
– and then I can find it hard to chop and change it afterwards because it does
seem to have a natural flow to it (yes, that probably means I'm too close to it and need an editor! ;) ). But reading Andy’s comments gave me a
reminder to be vigilant in checking that I am being as clear as I can be about
the information or concept I am writing about.
In an effort to learn how to do that better, do any of you
have particular ways you ensure you are passing on your knowledge as clearly
and concisely as you can – I’d love to hear from you if so!
Claire is a freelance
writer and editor, mum to two gorgeous young children, pastor’s wife, worship
leader and school governor. Claire’s desire is to help others draw closer to
God through her writing, which focuses on authenticity, marriage, parenting,
worship, discipleship, issues facing women today etc. Her books include Taking
your Spiritual Pulse, CWR’s Insight Into Managing Conflict and Cover
to Cover: David A man after God’s own heart and BRF Foundations21 study
guides on Prayer and Jesus. She also writes a regular column for
Christian Today as well as Bible study notes, and her next book, Insight Into
Self-acceptance, is due out in October. She is currently working on another
co-written book, Insight Into Burnout,
as well as her own book Taking off the
mask: learning to live authentically. To find out more about her, please
visit www.clairemusters.com and @CMusters on Twitter.
You're absolutely right. I struggle with this in fiction, too - there's such a fine balance between trusting the reader to make inferences, but giving them all the information they need to do so! I find the best way is (frustratingly) to let it rest. When I re-read a chapter two or three weeks after I wrote it, I can more easily see the 'gaps' I've left.
ReplyDeleteWell said, Claire. One of the things I aim to do in writing fiction is to convey knowledge, something worthwhile to my readers, so that they go away feeling not merely entertained, but nourished. But, as Fran has said above, it's a fine balance. Someone who read my book, Time to Shine, told me it was a 'life-changer' to her. But someone else implied that I'd overdone it in another book. Reading aloud, and having an honest and reliable writing buddy is the answer for me.
ReplyDeleteReading through a WIP with a view to spotting jargon can help too - if we're on the look out for words that might appear foreign to someone new to the faith, for instance, then we might spot other places where we've been obtuse. Good blog!
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