Learning confidence with Colin the Harsh - by Fran Hill

You bump into someone in the street. ‘Sorry,’ you say.

‘No, I’m sorry,’ says your bumpee.

‘No, my fault,’ you insist.

‘My fault,’ they say. ‘I’m so sorry.’

‘No, really …’

And it could go on for ever, this quest to be the one in the wrong, if you didn’t both have shopping to do, letters to post, and other people to apologise to.

They say it’s a British thing. Whatever it is, my creative writing tutor, Colin, was determined to stamp it out.

I joined his class in 1995 when my third child had started school. During that first lesson, he asked a woman to share her work. She opened her notebook, announced, ‘I’m sorry – it’s not very good,’ and began to read.

He interrupted her. ‘Rule Number One,’ he said. ‘We will never apologise for what we’ve written.’

It took us weeks to learn that he meant it. If we launched into a bumbling, self-effacing, ever so ‘umble apology, he’d put up his hand, like a police officer stopping traffic, and say, ‘Start again.’

He wouldn’t accept any of the following:
‘Sorry – it’s not quite finished.’
‘I do apologise – I think it’s a bit rambly.’
‘I’m sorry – I had to rush this before I came out tonight.’
‘I’m sorry – it’s not my best work.’
‘Apologies for this – it’s a bit depressing.’
‘Sorry about this one – it’s not the funny stuff I usually do.’
‘Sorry, guys – I didn’t have time to do the usual edit.’
‘Gosh, how can I follow Simon’s? It was brilliant. Well, I guess I’ll read it anyway.’
‘I really struggled with this. I’m sorry if it doesn’t come over clearly.’
‘Oh dear, I’ve lost my place. Sorry, sorry. Let me just find it. I knew this was going to read badly.’

The need to apologise beforehand – or during - was as strong as a Delhi-belly urge: verbal diarrhoea in its purest form.

Sometimes, we’d even apologise all over again for apologising.

‘I’m losing the will to live,’ Colin would say.

One day, he brought in a pineapple. Don’t ask me why he chose a pineapple; Colin moved in Mysterious Ways. ‘Every time I sense an apology-fest coming,’ he said, ‘I will shout “Pineapple!” at which point you must stop explaining, justifying and second-guessing our reactions, and just read the damn piece!’

That was a turning point.

And next week, if you don't stop apologising, I'll bring a tin and throw it at you

‘This is a piece I wrote last night about my grandmother’s funeral,’ we learned to begin, or ‘I wrote the start of a short story. Here it is.’

We could request particular critique, but only in positive terms. These were fine: “Could you listen out for sections you think are confusing?” or “I’d like to get the girl’s childish voice exactly right. Could you comment on that?” As Colin put it, ‘Self-aware is fine. Self-deprecating nonsense, no.’

He also pointed out that, sometimes, when we heralded a piece with ‘This is a bit rubbish,’ it wasn’t lack of confidence at all. It was covert over-confidence. We thought we were the new Stephen King or J K Rowling.

‘So, I’m not allowing false modesty either,’ he’d say. ‘It’s not sincere. And if you come to class thinking you’re Booker Prize material, you won’t listen to anyone’s critique. Go and join Embroidery or Spanish Cookery: something you think you need help with.’

Colin the Harsh, he was, but also Colin the Wise.

Anyway, I’m sorry if you found this blog post a bit …..


Fran Hill is a writer and English teacher from Warwickshire. Her website will tell you lots more and you can buy her book 'Being Miss' from there, or a bespoke poem, or a date with Sean Bean or Keira Knightley, or Fran's how-to guide about making false promises to people. 


  1. Ouch.... So true, making yourself sound worse than you are because you secretly think you're fantastic. Hmm, I like the sound of your Colin. Thanks Fran x

    1. That was Colin, as honest as bricks. He didn't let anyone faff about.

  2. Brilliant. I think we have a compulsion to apologise because it gives us a false sense of control over what others think - a lost cause if there ever was one.

    1. That's a very wise observation. If you get there first with the criticism, you can say, 'Well, I WARNED you it was bad!'

  3. How you weave wisdom and humour together so well is a wonder to me. Beautifully written words that hit home with subtle intention. Truly thought-provoking and helpful. Every writer needs a Colin. Thanks, Fran!

    1. Very kind comments, Joy. Every writer needs a Colin, yes. He certainly made a lot of difference to me in the five years I was in his classes.

  4. I agree with Joy. Delightful.

  5. Encouraging post. Think I would really like Colin if I met him (and also feel a bit scared!)

    1. You'd have loved him. He'd been the Director of Surrey Social Services before he retired and THEN began to teach writing. So he had a lot of wisdom behind him about how to deal with people. He died a couple of years ago in his eighties, but was still running his classes!

  6. I was quoting Colin to someone last weekend actually (you've mentioned him before). His fame has travelled as far as Yorkshire. Hope he would be pleased :) Fab post Fran Hill. Apologising is so very British. But it's one aspect of our culture that can be very unhelpful. Great post, as ever.

    1. Yes, I thought I'd mentioned him before in a blog post, maybe just after he died. He meant a lot to me, because he acted as a mentor for years after I left his class to study at uni and steered me through when I began teaching adults myself.

  7. Great post, Fran! I think we should start posting pineapples at random in the ACW Facebook group. (And I'm sorry my reply isn't very eloquent...)

  8. As it happens I have an EXCELLENT recipe for Pineapple Cheesecake.
    Thanks Fran. It sounds as if Colin talked a lot of sense. I think he'd be proper proud of you.

    1. That's a lovely thing to say. Actually, that's two lovely things to say - the cheesecake and the proud bit!

  9. Bumpee. I am forever in your debt for that beautiful word. I shall have to re-write my novel to include it somewhere......

    1. Wiktionary reckons there's already a definition for it. Who knew? https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/bumpee

  10. Yes, we've all been there... both places.


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