Lockdown Haiku, by Georgie Tennant
I adore the humble haiku. In just 3 lines, comprising only 17 syllables (though the syllables are a debatable point for haiku purists), it conveys so much. Far from being a cop-out choice for poets in a hurry, the well-written haiku takes time and ruthless editing. If you find yourself suffering from the onset of over-verbose-ness, a little haiku practice might be just the thing.
I became especially fond of the haiku during the Rethink Creative Lent Challenge a few years back. At the start of Lent, a list of words is published; participants create something each day in response to one of the words (I say ‘create’ not ‘write’ as some participants are photographers or artists). Determined to push myself to meet the challenge of producing a daily piece, the haiku became my go-to. I loved crafting these mini-works of art each day, in response to words like believe, heard, led, watch.
Reading, on an ACW Facebook thread recently, that someone had attended a Zoom Writers’ Session on haiku, I amused myself by creating some "Lockdown Haiku," for posterity. If you are a haiku purist, read no further and, instead, educate yourself better about the real haiku rules, which I will be shamelessly breaking, here (also – NanoHaiMo – who knew?!). If, like me, you are simply here for amusement, and to obsessively syllable-count to catch me out, read on!
Lockdown Haiku
I
Working from home, whilst
Home-schooling children is an
Impossible feat.
II
Can’t do this today.
Please go away,
everyone.
House is far too small.
III
Sunrise: beauty, peace.
I breathe in, grateful.
Sounds of
Children stirring –
help!
IV
Need to write today.
Year 4 Maths preventing
this!
Home school not for me.
V
Google Search: Ideas
For lockdown home-schooling. I
Wish I hadn’t looked.
VI
Never been a fan
Of the phone. But being seen
On screen – fresh
horror!
VII
Fragile peace shattered
By announcement of sore
throat.
Here we go again!
VIII
Endless catering.
Food bill astronomical.
Bring back school
dinners!
IX
No time to write; I’ll
Pen an angst-filled
poem. I’m
Feeling better now.
X
Dawn: optimistic.
Afternoon: patience
wears thin.
Evening: pass the wine!
XI
Lockdown emotions:
Stressed-out,
mostly. Envy, too,
Of empty-nesters.
XII
Missing old rhythms.
I’ll never get used to
this.
My soul in tumult.
XIII
Hit a low today.
Covid steals
everything.
Mental health in
shreds.
XIV
Back to work! I skip
From the house. Today
they can
Cope alone. Rejoice!
XV
Devastating lows,
Hope-fuelled highs. The mundane
Middle: God in all.
What would your lockdown haiku themes be? Do comment on the blog or the Facebook page!
Georgie Tennant is a secondary school English teacher in a Norfolk Comprehensive. She is married, with two sons, aged 12 and 9 who keep her exceptionally busy. She writes for the ACW ‘Christian Writer’ magazine occasionally, and is a contributor to the ACW-Published ‘New Life: Reflections for Lent,’ and ‘Merry Christmas, Everyone,’ and, more recently, has contributed to a phonics series, out later this year. She writes the ‘Thought for the Week’ for the local newspaper from time to time and also muses about life and loss on her blog: www.somepoemsbygeorgie.blogspot.co.uk
Definitely resonate with a few of the verses!
ReplyDeleteUtterly magnificent Georgie!! A good haiku is a work of art. These are funny, honest and powerful. Just what I needed this morning x
ReplyDeleteThese are brilliant. Laughter has wet me up for the day
ReplyDeleteLove these, Georgie. It's also my favourite form of poetry. You can say so much in just those three little lines.
ReplyDeleteLove this: Pen an angst filled poem
ReplyDeleteThank you for this teaching post!
I love a haiku - great for Twitter responses too.
ReplyDeleteThese are brilliant Georgie! Well done!!
ReplyDeleteThere's a humanity about these I really like. You reflect so many different experiences and moods. And your syllables, as always, and just like your sonnets, are bang on!
ReplyDeleteI, empty-nester,
ReplyDeleteCan't imagine the stresses
Which make profound lines