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Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Stepping Stones or Stumbling Stones? - by Lucy Mills

If you want to get a point across, try not to baffle your readers.

Challenge, by all means. Inspire to think, certainly.

But leaving readers frowning because they don’t know what that phrase means will only hamper them.

Of course, sometimes things are ‘hidden’ in our writing.  We do it all the time in stories and analogies.  Jesus did it with parables.

But we want to give our readers a chance to see it.

There is a secret there to be found, if readers dare to explore, to reflect, to ruminate. But sometimes we veil meaning with jargon, obfuscating the obvious. 

We must also be aware of who is most likely to be reading, and how our words can help them understand. Jargon, technical language and even what might be just termed as ‘long words’ can be problematic (I would not, in all circumstances, use ‘obfuscate’, for example!).

Recently, I was editing an article (written by someone else) where a certain phrase completely stumped me.  It was written by an academic, so I floated it past some other ‘academics’. They were equally bemused.  Sometimes we get so engrossed in the things we understand, we neglect to realise that others may not have come across them before.  Yet we don’t see any need for explanation.

I embrace the philosophy that it’s better to ‘ask a stupid question’ than it is to agonise in ignorance.

But I don’t want to cause my readers agonies of ignorance. I don’t want to place a needless block in front of them.

Yes, there are times my writing goes deep, but in those cases it is my job to present the topic as simply as possible.  Simplicity can lead to deeper understanding, because it doesn’t clutter the way with unnecessary barriers and stumbling stones. If your topic is already challenging and needs effort to grasp, don't add extra hurdles to it!

Are your words stepping stones or stumbling stones?  Are you so impressed with your own grasp of language, or so taken with a new jargon, that what you are saying gets completely lost?

Sometimes it’s not even complexity that’s the problem, but vaguery.  Just as there are obscure phrases that make so sense to us, there are often ‘buzzwords’ floating around, ‘in-phrases’ that crop up everywhere.  But their very trendiness empties them of meaning. Yes, maybe they are ‘on trend’, but what do they actually mean, and – ahem – does anybody know? Or have we used the word so much that it’s become a parody of itself?  Do we need to find a new way of saying it?

Is there a word you always use, fling about, almost as your 'badge'? What does it mean? Does it still mean what you thought it meant? Words are funny things, always collecting extra baggage. Just as they can take on other meanings, they can also lose meaning.

I’m not talking about patronising our readers or making things too basic.  I’m not talking about ‘telling’ rather than ‘showing’.  What I am talking about is using language to illuminate, to draw our readers to discover and be excited by their discovery. 

Depth is found in simplicity.  If we make our writing too complicated 'just because we can', it becomes all about itself. The thing that is supposed to point to meaning has become its own end – and is, therefore, meaningless.

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Lucy Mills

Lucy's first book, Forgetful Heart: remembering God in a distracted world, was published in 2014 by Darton, Longman and Todd (DLT). She's written articles, poetry and prayers for various publications and is an editor at magnet magazine. www.lucy-mills.com

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3 comments:

  1. So true, Lucy. There is a huge collection of Christian jargon for a start! The one is actually feel we need to explain is, in fact , 'God's Love'. This is so vague, and is thrown at us in sermons all the time - even church-goers need an in-depth sketch around What exactly is God's Love, and how does it differ from our own variety? Because, it does. And then, there is grace ...

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  2. I really like the idea of words collecting baggage - and I'm sure many of us just load them with more in our own minds! Such a good post, Lucy.

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  3. Sorry to be coming in late on this, Lucy. I love your article. I hate people who use big words and jargon, or who write pieces that are so enigmatic and obscure that you have to puzzle out what they're getting at. What you're saying is that such writers are showing off.

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